Central park Giant
Some people think giants are real and
some do not. Well I have some proof that
they are real. If you go in the middle of
central dawn, the park. You will see a
big hand sticking out of the ground over a tree. People say that hand was there before the
park was build.
So, one day me and my friend got shovels
and started to dig. After digging for at
least 2-3 hours, we saw the arm connecting to the hand. When we saw that, me and my friend started to
believe that giants are real.
nice story
ReplyDelete-you need a comma after the word /well/ in your second sentence
-in your last sentence in your 1st paragraph you wrote /was build/ change it to /was built/
-change /me/ to /I/ in your second paragraph
-overall nice story.